Writing



= __Mystery Story__ = media type="custom" key="11436214" = = = __My Exposition__ =

Exposition moderation 14/2/11 Name:Logan W.A.L.T:We are assessing our skills in writing an exposition

“Should Greytown school be offering extra curricula activities such as music,dance,drama and sport?”

Plan: Greytown school should not get extra curricula activities because it costs too much money.It would take a long time to get everything you wanted to be done.We already have 1-1 laptops what more do we need all that will happen is younger children would want more things and that means more money down the drain.We don’t need to be like any other schools.School is just a lead up for college.We have a lot of things we are a lucky school and no students no how hard and frustrating it is to do all of that students just say that they want this and that for no reason teachers put in a lot of hard work to get our school right and we should respect that.

Exposition: Gretown should not be getting new things because all the younger syndicates would want more things and that would lose a lot of money.We already do rugby sevens ripper rugby futsal and a lot more what else is there to get.

I like Greytown school as it is it is a good school we have 1-1 laptops we should be thanking not asking.The teachers at Greytown school put in a lot of hard work it is really frustrating work to do.The kids just want more we have heaps of things why would you want more to get things and don’t use them.We should respect our teachers they put in more hard work than you think of they handle school very well.On the other side it would be good to get new things just make sure they last.Or we won’t be getting new things in a long time.

I personally think that we are an exciting school because we have people and schools that come and see how much fun we have.We have had a lot of fun things happen to us like what now coming to school and all of those things and they all count as well.Can’t you see what I'm doing now our whole syndicate is we are on the laptops how lucky are we and we get to take them home.With only a one hundred dollar laptop fee we don’t need any books except for maths that is how fun our school is why do we need any more what like a canteen why? it would be good but does anyone have any reason what to eat and you can just buy school lunches from the shop or fish and chip shop.

That is what I think we should do and thank you for reading my exposition. :)

__ My Recount __

=== swimming sports On wednesday the sixteenth of february the totara,the karaka and the kauri syndicates went down to the swimming pools for our swimming sports day.I was very nervous but a little confident i didn’t really want to go to inter-school but I just guessed that I should try. So i could get a free swim afterwards as well. before the race I was doubting myself a lot but instead I just got in the pool and swam it was quite fun and refreshing but Jayden got first by long and sadly i got fourth but i was still proud of my self but then i remembered I still had breast stroke to do. I was waiting a long time until my race finally came and it was only me and Liam in it so again I just dived in and started swimming i was going normal at the start for the first length and just when i didn’t notice Liam gained at least something like a metre on me and we were almost at the end so i had to go fast and i went faster and faster until i finally beat and i was very happy even knowing i didn’t want to go to inter-school but i came first. After everything else we had the house race and my house Tainui won and that made me even happier and then the parent,teacher and year eight races and then the year eights won but after the widths then our free swim the thing i was waiting all day for so the day turned out good after all. : ) ===